All the Advice I Can Get

I wrote my memoir rough draft in a hurry last week. I didn't even have time to read it over all at once. I guess I hoped that it would just be a good memoir by itself but after the feedback I received I know now I have a lot of work ahead of me. I am going to take all the advice (although limited), and use it to better my paper. I will try to add more details and put all my emotions into it so that it can be more relatable and it will draw the readers in. In addition, I will also be sure to re-read it many times over just to catch all that my peer editors did. Hopefully I will be able to relate to their feedback. Finally, I will be sure to go back over all my grammatical errors as well. I have a long road ahead of me but I know my paper will be much better in the end.